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I don't see too much errors with the beard, but perhaps giving it some more hair-stumps a little randomly close to the actual beard.
The line on Shaggy's neck gets a bit weird. I believe its too far down. I believe it should come from the end of the jaw.
His eye feels weird as well, but sadly I'm not sure what the problem is. Maybe its how its really thick, like he would wear a lot of make-up.
I'm also a bit confused on the clothing shadings. Shaggy has one style of shadowing on his shirt, which isn't like any shadowing elsewhere.
But I really like the softness of this. The background is pleasing to the eye and suits their coloring scheme.
Well done!
I thought this was brilliant when I saw it, and I couldn't spot too many issues. However, the glasses are pretty weird, since they're pulled back and look kind of awkward... Otherwise, I love this so much.
The beard looks a little weird, but if I recall you did state you weren't use to drawing them. So you get a freebie on that C; so get better on that. A suggestion is that you draw the jawline in the sketch and then follow that. That's how I draw beards at least, even zeh small ones!
Otherwise this was fantastic. The shading and use of gradients... just magnificent!
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